thought on the first and last speech

I have improved in my last speech from my first speech. My first speech I didn't show that much interest in the first speech as I did the last speech. I also didn't kick my feet around at all during the last speech so that also improved. I looked at the audients a lot more than in the first speech. All around my last speech was better than my last one.

How to speech

I think that all around my speech was great and very funny. Setting up the tent was a little hard but I still got it up. I also explained how to set up a tent very loud and clear. I didn't kick my leg around at all so that was a big improvment. The only thing that I need to work on is looking at more people when I give my speech. But all around the speech went better than I thought it would and it was a lot of fun.